Some
groupFix the agreement mistake
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of
people
are of the opinion that the best way to change the situation
is just acceptChange the verb form
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that,
for
an
job or lack of money, and some others assume that,
attemptWrong verb form
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and improve
such
situationCorrect article usage
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it would be better. I agree to some extent that trying would play a key role
to changeChange preposition
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situationAdd an article
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.
This
assay will provide my personal view in detail.
On the one hand, it can be certainly said that, for the first step,
people
have to accept their
but it does not sufficient for changing their life. Despite the fact that
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some
people
believe that dealing
problemFix the agreement mistake
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it Correct pronoun usage
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is the best way,
but Correct word choice
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they
escape from their issues. If we do not make a huge effort for that, it will
be remainedChange to the active voice
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stable.
For example
, lack of money was the main
problem
for my friend, but she
doWrong verb form
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nothing about
this
, and just
expectWrong verb form
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that one day
every thingCorrect your spelling
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willWrong verb form
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be okay.
whereas
, the second step
overlookCorrect subject-verb agreement
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, and it is doing
action for our
problem
. The more
attemptFix the agreement mistake
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, the more benefits.
On the other hand
, some
people
are against the above-mentioned view.
ImproveWrong verb form
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our selvesCorrect your spelling
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and
boostWrong verb form
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our
are not only
but
also
beneficial. It is reasonable that
people
want to tackle
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their
problemFix the agreement mistake
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and try to build their
lifeFix the agreement mistake
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. They are adorable.
in addition
,
earnWrong verb form
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money and
provideWrong verb form
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tremendous
opportunityFix the agreement mistake
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which Correct pronoun usage
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makeChange the verb form
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us satisfied, need to
, and it is essential to change our lives.
In conclusion, both of them are
along with
each other. Because , at
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first we have to accept our
problemFix the agreement mistake
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and know about
itCorrect pronoun usage
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in detail to
them,
then
planingCorrect your spelling
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and
tryWrong verb form
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to do our best is the crucial thing that we
are obligeChange the verb form
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to care about it.