The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.
The given bar graph provides six different kinds of educational settings in 6 aspects,
such
as preschoolschool, primary school
, secondary school
, college, private training institutes, and universities in the UK in 2010. Overall
, it is clear that
nursery and primary school
have far the highest amounts of women
.
Firstly
, the number of men
in nursery and primary school
are significantly low, in comparison with women
. Men
's number in these two fields is approximately 6 and 10 percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
while
women
's are about 98% and 95%. Interestingly, men
's total has increased from secondary school
and it continues a rising trend until university, where it reaches its highest ratio in total. However
, the proportion of women
who have descended from secondary school
and it is witnessed a slight decrease. Additionally
, men
's numbers are leveled
up to nearly 70% at university, in comparison with Change the spelling
levelled
women
with 30%. Particularly, in college women
's and men
's amounts are exactly equal since the percentage is 50. Lastly
, the biggest fluctuation between men
and women
are
in the nursery, Correct subject-verb agreement
is
due to
the highest number being 98 with women
and the lowest being 6 with men
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, women, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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