You bought sone clothing and not satisfies with your purchause Write a letter to the company .in your email Give details of the purchause Describe the problem Explain why you need a replacement urgently
Dear Rosha Department Store
With pleasure
I bought a black leather off-shoulder bag from your store two weeks ago. It was an expensive item, but it
was not belong
to an authentic brand, so I asked Change the verb form
did not belong
from
the Change preposition
apply
sales woman
about the quality and she Correct your spelling
saleswoman
ensured
me that the bag Verb problem
assured
is
qualified enough and I could use it for a long time . Through your store Wrong verb form
was
repetiution
and based on my previous experiences with your shop, I bought it. Unfortunately yesterday I understood, Correct your spelling
repetition
reputation
the
handle Correct word choice
that the
has
ripped off Wrong verb form
had
due to
the low quality of the fabric, and also
I think it hasn’t
made in Verb problem
wasn’t
proper
way or at Add an article
a proper
the proper
list
the frame Correct your spelling
least
hasn’t
done any qualification check . It is obvious that the handle Wrong verb form
hadn’t
dose
not match with the main body and it is a little bit weak and narrow to carry out the weight of the bag and Correct your spelling
does
other component
of it.
I would like to ask you to solve my problem and Change the wording
another component
other components
suggesting me
a new qualified similar item. As I bought it for Wrong verb form
suggest
using
during my vacation and on my near trip, please replace it Replace the word
use
at
the shortest possible time. Your kind attention will be Change preposition
in
appreciating
.
Best regardsWrong verb form
appreciated
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that your letter follows a clear logical structure with separate paragraphs for each point.
coherence cohesion
Use a polite greeting and closing for a more appropriate and formal tone.
coherence cohesion
Stick to one idea per paragraph. Each paragraph should clearly address a specific point of the task.
task achievement
Fully address each point in the task. Provide specific details of the purchase, clearly describe the problem, and justify why a replacement is needed urgently.
task achievement
Use a suitable tone for formal correspondence. Avoid informal phrases and ensure your request is polite and to the point, with appropriate language.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.