You bought sone clothing and not satisfies with your purchause Write a letter to the company .in your email Give details of the purchause Describe the problem Explain why you need a replacement urgently

Dear Rosha Department Store With pleasure I bought a black leather off-shoulder bag from your store two weeks ago. It was an expensive item, but it
was not belong
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to an authentic brand, so I asked
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the
sales woman
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about the quality and she
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me that the bag
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qualified enough and I could use it for a long time . Through your store
repetiution
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and based on my previous experiences with your shop, I bought it. Unfortunately yesterday I understood,
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ripped off
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the low quality of the fabric, and
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made in
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way or at
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the frame
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done any qualification check . It is obvious that the handle
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not match with the main body and it is a little bit weak and narrow to carry out the weight of the bag and
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of it. I would like to ask you to solve my problem and
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a new qualified similar item. As I bought it for
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during my vacation and on my near trip, please replace it
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the shortest possible time. Your kind attention will be
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. Best regards
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that your letter follows a clear logical structure with separate paragraphs for each point.
coherence cohesion
Use a polite greeting and closing for a more appropriate and formal tone.
coherence cohesion
Stick to one idea per paragraph. Each paragraph should clearly address a specific point of the task.
task achievement
Fully address each point in the task. Provide specific details of the purchase, clearly describe the problem, and justify why a replacement is needed urgently.
task achievement
Use a suitable tone for formal correspondence. Avoid informal phrases and ensure your request is polite and to the point, with appropriate language.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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