The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the annual milk production in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010.
Overall
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, all the countries increased their production between 1990 to 2010 except
Australia
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which experienced a negative trend.
However
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, the
Netherlands
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and
Australia
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combined cover up to 90% of milk manufacture. At
first,
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the
Netherlands
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has still been the most dominant producer since 1990. They produce slightly below 50% of total manufacturing, in the number of 11.262 million litres.
Therefore
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, In 20 years, They succeed in reaching notable improvement, in the number of 11.466 million litres.
Nevertheless
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,
Australia
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which is the second largest producer had decremental growth. In 1990, They produced slightly below the
Netherlands
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, with a number of 11.246 million but in 2010 they had a significant decrement.
To conclude
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, All the countries experienced positive growth except
Australia
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.
However
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, the
Netherlands
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and
Australia
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have the majority share of milk manufacture in that period of time.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, netherlands with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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