You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child. Write a letter to the parents.

Dear Sir or Madam, I read an advertisement in an Australian magazine for living with your family and looking after your
six year old
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child. I am writing to inform you that I am interested
to apply
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in applying
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for
this
job as I am doing a course in Childcare and enjoy living with children as well. I am currently a student
of
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Childcare
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a Childcare
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course and want to gain practical knowledge of my field of study. It will be helpful for my future job prospects as well. I will be pleased to gain
this
experience by looking after your child. I believe that I am a suitable person for
this
post as I have all the qualities required. I enjoy the company of children and
also
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very
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patient person.
In addition
,I have the skill to involve children in constructive tasks that are useful for their
overall
development. Discussing my free time hobbies, I go for a walk in the evening daily and enjoy outdoor activities as well.
Moreover
, I have a creative mind and
wil
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will
love to teach creative things to your child. Looking forward
for
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your kind consideration. Yours faithfully, Rohan Mishra
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coherence cohesion
Ensure the letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Work on creating a logical flow between paragraphs for enhanced coherence.
task achievement
While you addressed the main purpose of the letter, including specific details about your experience and how you can contribute to the child's well-being/development would strengthen your task response.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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