The diagram below shows the process for recycling products
The provided diagram illustrates the recycling process for products.
Overall
, various end products can be produced from garbage boxes all over a city. The primary input for this
cycle includes unusable items and trash.
Initially
, trash is gathered by special trucks from the streets. They are sent to sorting locations in which materials of different kinds are separated by workers and sorted into various categories. After
this
, every category of goods is compressed into square blocks and sent to huge crushing gears. In the next stage, all pieces are washed in a container full of water.
Once they are cleaned, The cleaned pieces which are called plastic pallets, will be passed through a machine to be heated and dried up. The raw materials are piled up finally
, and various usable products such
as stationery, clothes, and plastics are made in order to be brought back into the consumption chain. It is worth mentioning that this
cycle is repeatableSubmitted by Reza Moravej
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