The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.
The graph below illustrates the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
shops
that closed and the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
shops
opened
in a single country between 2011 and 2018. The highest Correct pronoun usage
that opened
amount
of shops
opened happened around 2011, where
approximately 8,500 Correct word choice
when
shops
were opened during the year
, and the lowest amount
of shops
getting
closed was around 2015, Verb problem
apply
where
only a mere 500 Correct word choice
when
shops
were closed during that year
.
Following the graph, we can see that the average amount
of shops
opening is at
a decline from 2011, with a few minor fluctuations during the Change preposition
on
period
, whereas
the average amount
of shops
that were closed have
been steady for the most part, disregarding the steep drop in the Correct subject-verb agreement
has
year
2015.
In the year
2012, only 4000 new shops
opened, which is a steep decline from the year
prior. However
, the amount
of openings had a stable increase for 2 years, reaching 6,000 in 2014, before decreasing again in 2015, where it remained around the same Change the quantifier
number
amount
for the rest of the period
.
The closures remained a
stable Correct article usage
apply
amount
throughout the period
, staying around a steady 6,000-7,000 throughout 2011-2014, before experiencing a steep drop in 2015, then
picking up a steady 5,000 for the rest of the period
.
In conclusion, closures for the most part remained a
stable Correct article usage
apply
amount
, only experiencing one drop throughout the period
, whereas
openings have been declining, with a few minor fluctuations throughout the period
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