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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some
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 argue that there will be serious problems for
people
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 who live in a country where they have to speak a foreign
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. I strongly agree with
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 are born with their own native
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 and communicating with different languages can cause
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misunderstandings
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people
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 were born with
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language
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, which is already used day by day.
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 is complex and most
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 have to learn it from scratch if they want to speak in a new one.
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, they need to spend so much time, because
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 have to learn about the
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 basics
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 as the structures and various verbs, and
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 they need to have the habit of using it. In some cases, they will easily forget about what they learn because they do not always use it daily.
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,
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 is used to communicate, which can cause misunderstanding if the speakers
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 not in the same preferences in
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. Since it is used to communicate on
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basis
, it cannot be denied that
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 who live in a country which has a different
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 will face problems in daily conversation.
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, if they want to ask about an address to someone, the difference in
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 can be a problem not only for those who ask
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 but
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 for
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 who will answer the directions. In conclusion, I completely agree that speaking in a new
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 for
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 who live in a country with a different
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 because it is different from their mother tongue and the possibility of having misunderstanding is high.

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Provide a more nuanced conclusion that encapsulates the complexities of the argument rather than a simple agreement. This shows a deeper engagement with the prompt.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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