The table below shows the numbers of students at a malaysian secondari school during two school years. the charts show the result of surveys asking the students what their favorite sports is
The given table displays the
quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
students
in Malaysian secondary education between 2004 to 2005 and 2014 to 2015, whilst the pie charts describe a survey of the proportion
of students
engaged in their favourite sports in that given period.
Overall
, the number of students
experienced an upward trend after ten years , while
the survey reported that after a decade the percentage of students
participating in basketball and football witnessed an increase, tennis and swimming had a downward trend, just rugby remained the same in the proportion
of students
involved in this
sport over a decade.
To begin
with, in the school year 2004-2005, there were 73,000 students
at a Malaysian secondary school. The figure increased by 18, 000 Students
in 2014-2015. In 2004-2005 Of those, 15 % of students
were attracted to basketball sports, albeit not as great as football's
( 30 %). Change noun form
football
this
figure then
increased after ten years to 35 % and 40 % respectively.
in contrast
, Tennis which was the most popular sport in Malaysian secondary education at 40 % in 2004-2005 had a decrease in the proportion
of students
involved in this
sport to 15 % in 2014-2015. likewise
the tennisAdd a comma
likewise,
,
and swimming figure decreased to become half (5 %) Remove the comma
apply
in
ten years later. Change preposition
apply
in addition
, the proportion
of students
participating in rugby did not change during the given period with 5 % of students
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