Plastic bags,plastic bottles and plastic packing are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?
Now-a-days
,plastic Correct the word
Nowadays
usages
are highly required by the
people all around the world.It carries more weight,cheap in price.Even,so many companies are Correct article usage
apply
incredibely
Correct your spelling
incredibly
incredible
growth
in the production of Replace the word
growing
plastics
.In our country the packing,water bottles and bags these all designed and manufactured by the
Correct article usage
apply
polythene
.In this
condition we will discuss the polythene
makes
damage Verb problem
causes
in
our environment and what should be done to solve Change preposition
to
this
issue.
Firstly
,large items such
as foods,cosmotics
,Correct your spelling
cosmetics
water
bottles are widely packed by Correct word choice
and water
the
Correct article usage
apply
polythene
materials.This
waste has been directly disposed
by the people.It is not at all segregated by Add the preposition
disposed of
the
categoryCorrect article usage
apply
wise
.The Correct word choice
apply
plastics
are not biodegrated
Correct your spelling
biodegraded
material
.It Fix the agreement mistake
materials
has
more toxic when it is burning condition.Verb problem
is
The humans
are closely Correct article usage
Humans
affecting
by Wrong verb form
affected
this
Correct determiner usage
these
plastics
and indirectly occuring
our human organs.Correct your spelling
occurring
For instance
,most of the rubbish all deposited to
the ocean and it Change preposition
in
all
Add a missing verb
is all
stored
stored and formed like as an island.The sea Verb problem
apply
creature's
Change noun form
creatures
also
get influenzed
Correct your spelling
influenced
influenza
while
eating the polythene
.So the environment gets damage
Wrong verb form
damaged
at
these Change preposition
for
all
above reasons.In Correct determiner usage
apply
annual
year we have really reached Add an article
the annual
an annual
upto
150 million Correct your spelling
up to
tonnage
for producing Change to a plural noun
tonnages
the
plastic Correct article usage
apply
wastages
.It could be Replace the word
waste
really
bad condition for our control system.To solve Add an article
a really
the really
this
problem what should be done as given in next paragraph.
Avoiding
the Change the verb form
To avoid
plasting
Correct your spelling
plastic
usages
the Fix the agreement mistake
usage
government
should be taken seviour
action Correct your spelling
serious
saviour
such
as classified
the rubbish items into two methods.One is for the Wrong verb form
classifying
biodegarted
and the other one is for Correct your spelling
biodegraded
nondegrated
.Next,monitoring and measuring the Correct your spelling
integrated
usages
of Fix the agreement mistake
usage
plastics
.This
system to
be controlled by the Add a missing verb
is to
government
.In our individuals to solve the issue.We should ignore the plastic usages
and have to use Fix the agreement mistake
usage
the
cotton bags,Correct article usage
apply
copper
water Correct word choice
and copper
bottlesin
our daily things.If these Correct your spelling
bottles in
bottles
follows
by an individual person the usage of Wrong verb form
are followed
the
Correct article usage
apply
polythene
is to avoided
.Add a missing verb
be avoided
For example
,the government
of africs
has introduced a new rule for avoiding Correct your spelling
Africa
the
Correct article usage
apply
plastics
.If the people using nonbiodegrated
things they will Correct your spelling
nonintegrated
paid
the fine charges and two days remand in Change the verb form
pay
be paid
priosn
.These rules must be Correct your spelling
prison
apply in
all over the world.
Wrong verb form
applied
At
Change preposition
In
conclusion
,Add an article
the conclusion
the
humans are affecting the environment by using Correct article usage
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
plastics
.This
we can understood
Change the verb form
understand
and
how the animals and sea creature's Correct word choice
apply
also
affected so the government
must take the
action to avoid the usage of Correct article usage
apply
polythene
materials and also
individuals needs
to support the problem.Change the verb form
need
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