The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The tables show the amount of money spent on
Fairtrade
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coffee
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and
bananas
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in two separate years in the
UK
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, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.
It is clear that
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sales
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of
Fairtrade
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coffee
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rose in all five European countries from 1999 to 2004, but
sales
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of
Fairtrade
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bananas
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only went up in three out of the five countries.
Overall
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, the
UK
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saw by far the highest levels of spending on the two products. In 1999, Switzerland had the highest
sales
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of
Fairtrade
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coffee
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, at €3
million
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,
while
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revenue from
Fairtrade
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bananas
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was highest in the
UK
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, at €15
million
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. By 2004,
however
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,
sales
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of
Fairtrade
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coffee
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in the
UK
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had risen to €20
million
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, and
this
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was over three times higher than Switzerland’s
sales
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figure for
Fairtrade
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coffee
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in that year. The year 2004
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saw dramatic increases in the money spent on
Fairtrade
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bananas
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in the
UK
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and Switzerland, with revenues rising by €32
million
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and €4.5
million
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respectively.
Sales
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of the two
Fairtrade
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products were far lower in Denmark, Belgium and Sweden. Small increases in
sales
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of
Fairtrade
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coffee
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can be seen, but revenue remained at €2
million
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or below in all three countries in both years.
Finally
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, it is noticeable that the money spent on
Fairtrade
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bananas
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actually fell in Belgium and Sweden.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fairtrade, coffee, bananas, uk, sales, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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