Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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will conclude the result by describing both views. One group of people think that

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young generation should be motivated

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rivalry with their age fellows.Because,

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more efforts by watching

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understanding with

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the children selfish and they only think for themself and maybe they can

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am concerned youth will

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