The chart below gives information on the percentage of British People giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010
The graph displays the
amount
of funds Change the quantifier
number
that
is
donated by the various age ranges of United Kingdom citizens in percentage Change the verb form
are
within
the Change preposition
between
year
of
1990 and 2010.
The highest rate of charity was Change preposition
apply
initially
led by the age range of 36 to 50 by just under 45 percent
, but Change the spelling
per cent
then
it was decreasing
by around 10 Wrong verb form
decreased
percent
and became 35 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2010. Change the spelling
per cent
Consequently
, the age range that reached the peak of the chart in 2010 is the United Kingdom society whom
Correct pronoun usage
which
in
Correct your spelling
is
their
51 to 65 by just under 40 Correct pronoun usage
apply
percent
, despite the fact that they were in Change the spelling
per cent
the
second place in 1990 with 35 Correct article usage
apply
percent
.
Change the spelling
per cent
In
the contrary, the Change the preposition
On
people’s
ages with the lowest percentage of charity in 1990 Change noun form
people
was
18 to 25 years by just above 15 Change the verb form
were
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
furthermore
it decreased until the Add a comma
furthermore,
year
of
2010, Change preposition
apply
thus
was
keeping its position at the lowest place Unnecessary verb
apply
of
the chart. Change preposition
on
Besides
, the second worst performance is done by the community in their 25 to 35 that
started with a decent number of just above 30 Correct pronoun usage
which
percent
, but Change the spelling
per cent
then
was
lowering the rate by the Unnecessary verb
apply
year
of
2010 until around 25 Change preposition
apply
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Last
, the middle performer is aged more than 65 years with around 30 percent
in 1990 and increased by just under 5 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
at the Change the spelling
per cent
year
of 2010.Submitted by vanadia on
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