The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

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A glance at the map given provides information regarding the proposed plan for the city of Brandfield and two sites will be built in

this

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area.

Overall

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it is clear that

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the plan for constructing a new shopping mall, which is marked by S1, is going to be located to the southeast of the housing estate. It is

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estimated will be situated in the middle of the main road and river to the north. Other than that, S2 will be added close to the railway in the south, near the industrial estate.

To begin

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with, the new shopping mall will be circled by a railway line near the city

center

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, the main road from south to the northeast, and the river flowing from the south to the north. It is

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going to be built near the housing estate. Turning to S2, it will be located in the southeast of the city of Brandfield,

along with

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the railway line from the north. Other than that, it is

also

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going to be built near the main road from the north to the south.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

183 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

modes of transport
public policy
urbanization
lifestyle changes
technological advancements
environment
city infrastructure
popularity
comparison
fluctuation
increase
decrease
trend
data
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