The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

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A glance at the map given provides information regarding the proposed plan for the city of Brandfield and two sites will be built in

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area.

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it is clear that

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the plan for constructing a new shopping mall, which is marked by S1, is going to be located to the southeast of the housing estate. It is

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estimated will be situated in the middle of the main road and river to the north. Other than that, S2 will be added close to the railway in the south, near the industrial estate.

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with, the new shopping mall will be circled by a railway line near the city

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, the main road from south to the northeast, and the river flowing from the south to the north. It is

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going to be built near the housing estate. Turning to S2, it will be located in the southeast of the city of Brandfield,

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the railway line from the north. Other than that, it is

also

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going to be built near the main road from the north to the south.

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