You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

You should write at least 150 words.
A glance at the map given provides information regarding the proposed plan for the city of Brandfield and two sites will be built in
this
area.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the plan for constructing a new shopping mall, which is marked by S1, is going to be located to the southeast of the housing estate. It is
also
estimated will be situated in the middle of the main road and river to the north. Other than that, S2 will be added close to the railway in the south, near the industrial estate.
To begin
with, the new shopping mall will be circled by a railway line near the city
center
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, the main road from south to the northeast, and the river flowing from the south to the north. It is
also
going to be built near the housing estate. Turning to S2, it will be located in the southeast of the city of Brandfield,
along with
the railway line from the north. Other than that, it is
also
going to be built near the main road from the north to the south.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • modes of transport
  • public policy
  • urbanization
  • lifestyle changes
  • technological advancements
  • environment
  • city infrastructure
  • popularity
  • comparison
  • fluctuation
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • data
  • figures
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