in todays world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantages of owing a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages

Nowadays, all over the world, most

people

have a

smartphone

.

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writer will provide the advantages and disadvantages

about

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owing

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smartphone

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. Having the phone contains a lot of different benefits in daily life

such

as communication, studying, chatting, ...etc.

Due to

the development in technology,

smartphone

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help everything become increasingly easier.

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,

people

can do everything

in

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time, even anywhere that we can do just by

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phone. Take a school as

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, today, many universities

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a lot of technological equipment for

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to look for academic information

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internet

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.

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, the majority of

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allow

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use

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smartphone

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in class to service

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study

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.

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, using

smartphone

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also

save

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a lot of time for

people

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many work or study. Thanks to the developed

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,

phone

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is more and more state-of-the-art.

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by a

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will have

disadvantage

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in future if we depend on

it

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hacker

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can log

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system and

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privacy

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information to gain

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money

from

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if it is hacked. Despite these disadvantages, I believe that the advantages of owning a

smartphone

far outweigh the disadvantages. Smartphones provide

people

with a way to stay connected with others, access information, and be entertained.

While

it is important to be mindful of the potential distractions and addictive qualities of smartphones, I believe that the benefits of owning one are clear.