You have been asked to organise a special dinner to celebrate your company’s achievements this year. Write a letter to the restaurant you have chosen. In your letter say : * why you want to come to the restaurant and when * how many people will attend the dinner * what special requirements you have
Dear Sir,
I hope
this
letter finds you in good health. I am writing Linking Words
this
letter to plan a special event in your Linking Words
restaurant
. To celebrate the company's achievements Use synonyms
this
year, we want to organize a special dinner at your place.
You know very well, your Linking Words
restaurant
serves a variety of cuisines and is famous for its welcoming nature and of course for the hospitality service. I chose your Use synonyms
restaurant
because it is far away from the hustle and bustle of the city. We will be there on Sunday night on the 15th of December at 8:00 Use synonyms
o' clock
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this
month.
We invite all of our employees, some guests and managers to be a part of Linking Words
this
special event. The number of people will be around 200 to attend Linking Words
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party. I selected your Linking Words
restaurant
, as it is suitable for the large gatherings.
For the dietary requirements, I would prefer to have separate cuisines for vegetarians and non-vegetarians because some of us consume only vegan items. I will be grateful to you if you manage Use synonyms
this
event successfully.
I hope to hear back from you soon!
Yours Faithfully,
Sam.Linking Words
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Consider splitting paragraphs for clarity, such as having a separate paragraph for the dietary requirements.
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Ensure consistency in tone throughout your letter; maintain a professional yet warm tone from start to finish.
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The tone is appropriately formal and expresses the purpose clearly.
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You have successfully listed all the necessary information such as the reasons for choosing the restaurant, date and time of the event, number of attendees, and special dietary requests.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite