You have some documents that you need to be translated into another language as soon as possible. Write a letter to a translation agency. In your letter: ● say what the documents are ● explain why you need them to be translated ● ask for the documents to be translated urgently

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Dear Sir or Madam. I am writing

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translation agency because I won a grand from

University

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so I don't know translate these

University

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documents

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and I want your help me. Nowadays, Our countries have some competition for universities and I won

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competition and they gave me grand for

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So the

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need to be translated for my

University

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If I don't translate the

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they won't enter the

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this

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reason, I will be quick to give

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to the

University

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because its grand gives only one and I must take

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opportunity Please the

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out urgently because Admission closes on January 9 so I necessary

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I need to give

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and I would be very grateful to you Yours sincerely Vaqqosov Ulug'bek

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coherence cohesion

The letter is generally understandable; however, there is significant room for improvement in clarity and structure. Developing clear, distinct paragraphs will assist in conveying each point more effectively.

coherence cohesion

Try to include a formal opening and closing salutation to enhance the professionalism of your letter. For example, begin with 'Dear Sir or Madam,' and conclude with 'Yours faithfully,' followed by your full name.

task achievement

Enhance the logical flow of the letter by clearly stating the type of documents and the urgency right in the opening paragraph. Make direct requests along with a concise reason. Avoid indirect statements.

coherence cohesion

Proofread your letter to correct grammatical errors and improve overall fluency. Using varied sentence structures and vocabulary can raise the score significantly.

task achievement

Ensure the writing tone is consistent and appropriate throughout the letter. The tone here sometimes appears informal due to the casual language and structure.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

131 words

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You have some documents that you need to be translated into another language as soon as possible. Write a letter to a translation agency. In your letter: ● say what the documents are ● explain why you need them to be translated ● ask for the documents to be translated urgently

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