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You have some documents that you need to be translated into another language as soon as possible. Write a letter to a translation agency. In your letter: ● say what the documents are ● explain why you need them to be translated ● ask for the documents to be translated urgently

#documents #language #translation #agency
Dear Sir or Madam. I am writing
a
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translation agency because I won a grand from
University
 so I don't know translate these
University
documents
 and I want your help me. Nowadays, Our countries have some competition for universities and I won
this
 competition and they gave me grand for
University
 So the
documents
 need to be translated for my
University
 If I don't translate the
documents
 they won't enter the
University
.
For
this
 reason, I will be quick to give
documents
 to the
University
 because its grand gives only one and I must take
this
 opportunity Please the
documents
 out urgently because Admission closes on January 9 so I necessary
documents
 I need to give
to
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 my
University
 and I would be very grateful to you Yours sincerely Vaqqosov Ulug'bek
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coherence cohesion
The letter is generally understandable; however, there is significant room for improvement in clarity and structure. Developing clear, distinct paragraphs will assist in conveying each point more effectively.
coherence cohesion
Try to include a formal opening and closing salutation to enhance the professionalism of your letter. For example, begin with 'Dear Sir or Madam,' and conclude with 'Yours faithfully,' followed by your full name.
task achievement
Enhance the logical flow of the letter by clearly stating the type of documents and the urgency right in the opening paragraph. Make direct requests along with a concise reason. Avoid indirect statements.
coherence cohesion
Proofread your letter to correct grammatical errors and improve overall fluency. Using varied sentence structures and vocabulary can raise the score significantly.
task achievement
Ensure the writing tone is consistent and appropriate throughout the letter. The tone here sometimes appears informal due to the casual language and structure.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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