Some people belive that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Urbanisation gives
an adverse hurdles
to jungle Correct the article-noun agreement
adverse hurdles
an adverse hurdle
life
. However
, individuals opine that steps are taken to save the animals
and birds
from extension
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extinction
such
as wild life protection
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Wildlife Protection
act
, Capitalize word
Act
opening
of Add an article
the opening
zoo
,and education among citizens. I concur with Fix the agreement mistake
zoos
this
phenomenon. I will discuss my reasons in the upcoming paragraphs.
The first reason is application
of wild Add an article
the application
an application
life protection
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Wildlife Protection
act
. The government had imposed many act's whose main motive Capitalize word
Act
is
to save the Wrong verb form
was
saffari
Correct your spelling
safari
life
. Animals
were killed from
a long time for pleasure and food. Which can cause Change preposition
for
extension
of many spices. Correct article usage
the extension
For instance
, in India, from
Change preposition
in
past
couple of years number of Correct article usage
the past
animals
killed by humans are
drastically Verb problem
has
decrease
Wrong verb form
decreased
due to
the fines and legal action taken by public authorities. In addition
to this
, zoo's
are in every city, where Change noun form
zoos
lion
, Fix the agreement mistake
lions
tiger
, Fix the agreement mistake
tigers
monkey
,Fix the agreement mistake
monkeys
pigeon
,and parrots are kept Fix the agreement mistake
pigeons
securly
. They are taken care Correct your spelling
securely
by
trained employees. Change preposition
of by
Hence
, this
great intitative
leads to safe shelter and food for all those wild Correct your spelling
initiative
inhabitats
. It leads to Correct your spelling
inhabitants
safe guarding
their Correct your spelling
safeguarding
life
.
Additionally
, the newspaper, internet ,and television play vital
role in educating people. Advertisements are Add an article
a vital
showns
Correct your spelling
shown
shows
every where
which state the importance of Correct your spelling
everywhere
ecosystem
and if Correct article usage
the ecosystem
this
chain broken
what are the negative effects to our environment. Schools Add the auxiliary verb
is broken
also
teach kids'
the benefits of Change noun form
kids
animals
and birds
. eventually, the purpose to spread
knowledge is handled by every Change preposition
of spreading
individuals
only to maintain a balance in Change to a singular noun
individual
ecosystem
.
Add an article
the ecosystem
an ecosystem
To sum up
, modernatisation damages the
Correct article usage
apply
animals
and birds
on
a higher extent many Change preposition
to
birds
like dudo
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the dudo
is
already gone but I firmly agree that, there are great Correct subject-verb agreement
are
intitatives
taken by Correct your spelling
initiatives
government
and media whose main motive Correct article usage
the government
to
spread Add a missing verb
is to
the
education to protect our jungle.Correct article usage
apply
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