You had a dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to your friend and express your fillings about the dinner. In your letter, you should include: Say what you enjoyed at the dinner Describe how you feel about his/her family Invite your friend and his family to your place
Dear Saini,
Hi, how are you doing? I hope you are doing well. By the way, I want to say thank you for inviting me to
dinner
last
weekend.
It was an amazing and exciting dinner
. The reason why I was pleasured is that I never had a New Year's party with my friend's family in my entire life. As you know, I came to Canada alone so I always take my time
by myself. Sometimes I felt lonely. Plus, I didn't expect that it would be awesome and fun. This
is because it was the first time
to met your family so I thought that I would not enjoy it. But it was really good.
Moreover
, it's been a long time
since to ate Korean traditional foods like rice cake, rice soup, and kimchi pencake. It was so tasty. Thanks to your mom, I ate rice soup on New Year's Day which is a traditional one in South Korea. My mom is also
glad that.
What's more, while
we ate dinner
, your parents gave me various advice that was helpful to me. I want to say appreciate it to your parents too.
Anyway, I enjoyed that time
. If I have an opportunity, I want to invite you and your family to my home for dinner
next Tuesday. Let me know if you are available to come to my place.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you.
Best wishes,
Hwiju Jin.Submitted by gnlwnww on
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Coherence & Cohesion
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General
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.