The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
The table illustrates how many proportions of expenditure, spending in three different
categories
in Ireland
, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey
in 2002.
Overall
, Turkey
and Ireland
lead the largest number
of consumerism in Food
and Beverages Correct article usage
the Food
categories
, while
leisure
/ education group were the least popular among Correct article usage
the leisure
three
Correct article usage
the three
categories
.
A third of total
food, drinks, and tobacco Correct article usage
the total
categories
were spent by Turkey
, being the largest among others. This
number
is followed by Ireland
with 28,91 % of expenditure spending on Food, drinks and tobacco, while
the remaining countries only experienced the lowest number
below 20% in the same categories
.
On the other hand
, Italy was the largest market in clothing and footwear products with the number
of consumerism at 9 %, compared with Turkey
, Spain, and Ireland
at around 6%. Although
Turkey
also
consumed
more expense in leisure and education, Verb problem
spent
this
group got the lowest percentage below 5 % in all countries.Submitted by 2024successielts on
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