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The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the number of phones sold by five different mobile phone brands worldwide over the period of 4 years from 2009 to 2013.
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, it is noticeable that the major sales came from Samsung and
Nokia
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 and there were two opposing trends for 5 brands. Samsung, Apple and ZTE were in accending status
while
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Nokia
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 and LG were in descending tendency. A deep analysis of the bar chart provided reveals that from the growing group, the highest sales belonged to Samsung which sold around 240
million
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 mobile phones in 2009, and
then
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 it continued
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its
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 upward to reach a high of 450
million
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 phones in 2013. Apple had the same trend when started at about 20 and level up to 150
million
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 in the same period . ZTE figures showed that there was a slight and stable development when almost sales were around 50 to 60
million
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units
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 over the period of 4 years. It is clear from the chart that,
Nokia
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 and LG have the same downward movement in revenue.
Nokia
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 got the earnings of 440
million
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units
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 in 2009 and significantly dropped to 250
million
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 in 2013,
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 , LG figures were 120 and 80
million
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units
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 in the same order.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words nokia, million, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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