The graph shows average house prices in countries from 2007 to 2014.

The graph shows average house prices in

countries from 2007 to 2014.
The line chart provides data about how much money was spent on living a house accommodation in three countries between 1997 and 2014. Units are measured in millions of dollars.
Overall
, it is evident that there was a significant increase in all countries,
however
, A county witnessed a noticeable growth over the period.
Moreover
, it is
also
worth noting that C
country
house prices were cheaper than others during the time. In detail,
three
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countries represented roughly the same price just above $ 100
thousand
in 1997. Afterwards, A county reached a small climb in the space of 4 years (1997-2000).
Besides
that, there was a dramatic rise in house prices to $500
thousand
from 2000 to 2003 before declining to just under $500K in 2006.
However
, it went up to nearly $600K
at the end
of the period. Plausible as
this
seems,
in particular
, note that b
country
experienced some fluctuations, particularly, until 2005,
there
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was
substantial
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jump to just up $300K. After decreasing to $250K in 2008,
this
country
grew to $500
thousand
in 2010 and remained unchanged
during
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4 years.
Furthermore
, it can be seen that C
country
rose gradually to $250K till 2006.
Last
but not least,
this
figure for C
country
accounted for $250
thousand
in 2014 after decreasing to $200K in 2008.
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