WRITE A LETTERR TO COMMUNITY HEALTH NURSE
I am writing to refer
Martin
Wison who is requiring your continued care
and urgent attention. Now he is set to discharged
into your Add a missing verb
be discharged
care
.
Martin
was presented to our care
on 13 october
with attempted suicide following Change the capitalization
October
overdose
of Mogodol. On admission , he was weak and depressed. He was prescribed Lovan 2oomg. During Add an article
an overdose
hopitalization
, he was diagnosed with type 2 diabetes Correct your spelling
hospitalization
hospitalisation
for
that health education Change preposition
apply
given
on diet and oral medication. Now, he is using Add a missing verb
was given
wheelchair
from 20\10. Currently, he has Add an article
a wheelchair
poor
appetite and Add an article
a poor
physically
unfit to do his activities.
Add a missing verb
is physically
Martin
was a retired bookkeeper and lives with his wife. He has had a habit of heavy smoker and social
drinker. He was depressed Correct article usage
a social
due to
gambling
addiction. He Correct pronoun usage
his gambling
was
started Unnecessary verb
apply
the
gambling 2 years ago Correct article usage
apply
as a result
he lost his friend and has lost a lot of his money including superannuation funds and in dept
. After that, he wishes to overcome addiction. He has had a history of bronchitis , Correct your spelling
debt
psoriasis
and Correct word choice
and psoriasis
underweight
.
I would highly appreciate it if you could take over Add a missing verb
is underweight
of
Change preposition
apply
Martin
in your care
. kindly encourage him to maintain his medicine routine as the SSRI is established. Assist and encourage him to join gambling
addiction group. Kindly help him to make an appointment with Correct article usage
a gambling
apsychologist
and Correct your spelling
a psychologist
psychologist
the
social worker for gambling Correct article usage
a
addition
therapy.
If you have any queries, don't hesitate to contact me.
Yours sincerely
NurseCorrect your spelling
addiction
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