The diagrams show the structure of solar panel and its use.

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The structure of solar

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panel

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and

its

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usage

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illustrated in the picture.

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, there are two types of solar

panel

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systems including heating

air

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and heating

water

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with transparent top which absorbs

sun

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rays

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. These heating facilities have almost similar structures, with

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inlet

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and

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outlet

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and main box, regardless of

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water

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the water

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pipe

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in the solar

panel

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to heat

water

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compared

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another

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one

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First,

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the solar

panel

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to heating

air

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facility absorbs

sun

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rays

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transparent

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a transparent

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top with

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inlet

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an inlet

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outlet

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, and main box. Cool

air

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is transferred through the

inlet

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into

box

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the box

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, and gathered

air

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is heated by

sun

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rays

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through

transparent

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top, and

then

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warm

air

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goes out by

outlet

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Second,

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the heating

water

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system is nearly

same

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, but it has

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water

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a water

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pipe which transfers

water

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. Cool

water

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goes into

pipe

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through

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inlet

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the inlet

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, and it is heated by

sun

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rays

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with heat energy and goes out by

outlet

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words panel, air, water, sun, rays, inlet, outlet with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
7
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

151 words

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The diagrams show the structure of solar panel and its use.

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