Fast food is becoming a part of people's daily life everwhere, and this has had negative effects on our lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree?
It is common to become a fast- fast
food
people
day to day-to-day lifestyle everywhere, and it has negative consequences for their lifestyle and diet. I totally agree with and I will discuss this
and I give you my opinions.
On the one hand, nowadays fast food
become very popular because these days people
are very busy earning money. As a result
, they do not have time to take food
with family. For example
, if someone goes to work for the office they don't have to spend time to come for lunch. As a result
, the Oder some fast food
like a restaurant. For the more, someone who does not care that Heath food
. They always love to eat outside because it is very delicious more than homemade food
. For example
, fast food
is very delicious because it is very sugary and oily. In my opinion, if it eats over becomes a negative an
effect like a non-communicable disease. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, adiabatic, cholesterol, and Pressure because they are careless about their food
they have to take medicine lifetime.
On the other hand
, nowadays very forums fast food
because they can Oder to easier. These days delivery services are very fast. As a result
, people
are addicted to it. for example
, these days pizza shops are everywhere. people
can very easily order. Although
people
are addicted to fast food
day by day.
In conclusion, in my opinionAdd a comma
,
food
become a people
part of life. because it is an easier lifestyle.but it negative affect
like a Correct your spelling
effect
non communicated
Add a hyphen
non-communicated
dishes
. Fix the agreement mistake
dish
People
are suffering for lifetimes and drink medicine for a lifetime.Submitted by manushamanu1024 on
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