The chart below compares the percentage of time Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar graph illustrates the proportion of All
mothers
, fathers
, or both
parents
in Australia assisting their children to do several activities
in 2023. The units are measured in percentage and activities
are divided into four types, there are dressing, homework, playing games, and preparing for bed.
Overall
it can be clearly seen that,
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both
parents
help their children in all categories, with the exception of the fathers
, who have a low percentage of assistance in all activities
.
Regarding the role of parents
in supporting their children when dressing, mothers
have the biggest rate at around 75%, both
mothers
and fathers
at half, whereas
helped fathers
only nearly 2%. Activitiy of homework, also
majority supported by mothers
at two-thirds, the role of both
parents
in this
activity accounted for just above 40%, and fathers
constituted one-tenth which was the biggest proportions
compared with other Fix the agreement mistake
proportion
activities
.
In terms of playing games, the percentage of parents
' support was the biggest proportion at exactly 70%, while
mothers
still have a bigger share at 25% compared with fathers
at only 5%. Lastly
, preparing the bed also
assists both
parents
at half, followed by mothers
at just above 40% and fathers
having the same number playing games.Submitted by 2024successielts on
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