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The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides data about
number
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a number
the number
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 of
seals
,
whales
 and
dolphins
 recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.
Overall
, the highest
number
 of
seals
,
whales
 and
dolphins
 recorded in the Gormez Straits was in 2018. As can clearly be seen,
initially
 the
number
 of
seals
 was more than 40, the
number
 of
whales
 was more than 20 and the
number
 of
dolphins
 was roughly 18.
However
, in 2010 the
number
 of
seals
 decreased to approximately 25 percent. The
number
 of
whales
 increased a little,
whereas
 the
number
 of
dolphins
 rose from 18 to approximately 21. In 2014 the
numbers
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number
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 of
seals
 and
dolphins
 rose and became more than 30,
however
, the
number
 of
whales
 decreased. The
number
 of
whales
 was a little more than 20. In the final
year
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year,
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 the
number
 of
seals
,
whales
 and
dolphins
 recorded in the Gormez Straits increased. In 2018 the
number
 of
whales
 is a little less than 30. The
number
 of
seals
 is more or less 45 and the
number
 of
dolphins
 is more than 50. In 2018 the lowest
number
 had
whales
,
whereas
 the highest
number
 had
dolphins
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, whereas".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, seals, whales, dolphins with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 15 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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