Some couples try to have a good career for having a baby; what you think?

Having

children

may be a goal in someone’s life. It’s for many reasons

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example, to have their

child

take care of them when they get old or to have them inherit the family name. But raising a

child

is not an easy task. It takes a lot of

time

and money to bring up an infant to be a good adult. So to be a good parent, one might need a good

career

first.

First,

giving birth costs around 30,000 - 50,000 Baht. If you want more

cares

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and services, it may be more expensive. Not only that the

prices

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for giving birth is high, but

also

the educational fee. There are free schools that

funded

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by the

gorverment

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government

. But if you want a better

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and environment ,you might want to take your

children

to private schools which cost around 40,000 - 100,000 per year.

From

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this

reason

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think it's best to have

good

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career

so that you can afford good things for your

children

.

Moreover

, taking care of the

child

is not only about buying them good things. You have to spend

time

with them too. Kids growing up lonely could become aggressive and violent. Spending

time

with your kids means a lot. Making them trust you, when they have any problem ,they will seek help from you and you can guide them to the good path. If you have to work

everyday

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from morning to night, you will miss the

time

with your kids.

Hence

, in my opinion,

good

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career

should not overwork you until you can't stay with your

children

.

On the contrary

, even if you need a good

career

to take care of your

baby

, you

should't

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shouldn't

should

take too much

time

to have a

baby

. Especially in

woman

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, the older you become the harder you can conceive.

Also

, the age gap between you and your

children

could make it harder to understand each other.

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these reason

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, if you take too long to have a good

career

, having

baby

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could get more complicated. In conclusion, I think it's a good idea to have a good

career

for having

baby

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. Because it takes a lot of money and

time

to raise a good

child

, and a good

career

can offer you both money and

time

. But taking too much

time

finding

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the best job might make it hard to have a

baby

. So you should decide wisely. It doesn't have to be the

highest paid

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job. Just

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enough and

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you spend some

time

with your

children

is

enogh

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enough

.