In today world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantage of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantage?

With

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the era of advancing

of

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apply

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technology,

companion

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companionship

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with

people

always is a convenience and electronic devices

is

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apply

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a

smartphone

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smartphones

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.

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writer

argue

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that

people

o

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who

belong to

smartphone

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smartphones

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have many benefits and prevent

from

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them from

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outdating

century

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the century

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. One of the beneficial

smartphone

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smartphones

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is you can bring it everywhere,

everytime

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every time

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you go. It can be compact,

convenient

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and convenient

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for you to go shopping for

work

for

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or

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exercise.

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, when you go to an important appointment you can bring

cellphone

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your cellphone

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and out in your pants pocket and join the meeting that

not

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does not

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impact you so much

instead

of the convenience of

smart

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a smart

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device.

Addtionally

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, it can be seen that the blower is expedient for one's self who

usse

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use

uses

that device.

Athother

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Another

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the

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another

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advantage of

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a handset

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handset

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a handset

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for

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is for

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people

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relax

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to relax

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and

work

or study , it can be supported

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by

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for

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by

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each

invididuals

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individual

individuals

.

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,

student

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students

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who study at university must have mobile surving for their essay,

test

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tests

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,

lectures

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and lectures

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,

share

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and share

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studies with

thire

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their

friends

for

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to

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work

together. For those

whose

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who

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work

in corporate offices or companies to set up

for

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apply

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their plan of

work

, forward

manuscript

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manuscripts

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to give

for

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to

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their boss or prepare for their

appoinmet

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appointment

appointments

.

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but not least,

for

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apply

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all

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apply

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people

, all of

age

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ages

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they

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apply

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can use

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their phone

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phone

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phones

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for their hobbies

such

as

listen

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listening

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to music,

play

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playing

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game

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games

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,

watch

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and watching

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a

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the

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new

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news

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. It

help

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helps

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they

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them

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are

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to be

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calm,

relax

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relaxed

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,

comfortable

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and comfortable

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after

thier

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their

studies,

work

or one day stressful.

Alternately

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, the

smartphone

can

be

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also give

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also

give you some

emotional

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emotion

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when you play games. Particularly,

student

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students

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who

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are addict

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addict

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addicted

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to "Related mobile"

and

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apply

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that

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which

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lead

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leads

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to some tragic cases. In Viet Nam of rural

area

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area,

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the grandchildren couldn't print money,

he

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so he

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loaded the game, he killed his grandmother.More reprehensible was that she had been stabbed multiple times.

To sum up

, some

advantage

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advantages

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smartphone

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of smartphone

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is

supported

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support

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for

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apply

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people

for

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in

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their

life

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lives

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but

also

have some serious

problem

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problems

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give for

people

.