The maps below show a cafe 10 years ago, 5 years ago and now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show a cafe 10 years ago, 5 years ago and now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The three given maps demonstrate changes to the layout of a café over a decade.
Overall
,
while
the café has been renovated over time, the most significant moderations have taken place in the
last
5 years, with considerable addition of facilities. The café was originally planned to have eight tables in the centre and two
terraces
near the entrance. A cash desk was located next to one of the
terraces
,
whereas
the food preparation area and restrooms were at the back of the building.
While
the café’s layout remained mostly unchanged, a table was added to each of the
terraces
5 years later. The café saw the most substantial changes over the
last
5 years.
Firstly
, two more tables have been added to the
terraces
, necessitating their expansion.
Furthermore
, the formerly circular tables have been replaced by long, rectangular ones to accommodate larger groups of customers.
Finally
, a counter has been erected between the existing cash desk and the toilets.
Submitted by tranbaongoc231007 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words café, terraces with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: