in some countries, an increasing number of children are overweight or obese as a result of eating too much fast food. Banning fast food from school canteens is the best way to fight this problem. to what etent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In a few countries, a

grow up

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number of pupils are

gain

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weight or

overweight

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being overweight

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as a consequence

of eating

to

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too

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much

unhealthyfood

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unhealthy food

. Preventing

the

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apply

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junk

food

from cafeteria

schools

may

it is

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the best way to combat

this

issue. Even

thought

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though

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a simple ban

fast

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foods in the school cafeteria seems to be a positive step, I do not agree that

this

method is the most

efective

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effective

measure to

alliviate

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alleviate

this

problem among the students at

schools

. Junk

food

has already been proven to be very detrimental to one's health,

for

this

reason

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preventing

schools

from vending it to their students is a great step in the right direction. The fewer

burgues

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burgers

burgees

, pizzas and

fat

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food

children

consumed, the better. if the school

cusine

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cuisine

cooked

fresg

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fresh

, healthy meals,

children

would eat them.

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measure,

thus

, could prevent

children

from eating a lot of fast

food

for

luch

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lunch

and may even help some of them to

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to

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eating healthy

food

.

However

, it is not sufficient to solve the general problem. The difficulty is that

consumption

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the consumption

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of unhealthy

food

for lunch at school is

only

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point of the issue. Research

show

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that

children

whom

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has

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parents at home with overweight,

also

their

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apply

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have an

incrised

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increased

risk of

become

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becoming

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pupils with obesity. so it

necessary

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to

starte

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start

this

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these

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new healthy habits at home,

encoureged

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encouraged

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ther

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their

children

to do regular physical exercise and

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to

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them to

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eat fresh meals at home.

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,

although

preventing

schools

to offer

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fast

food

is a

mesure

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measure

in the right direction,

i

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believe that, can not

avoid

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prevent

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children

becoming

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from becoming

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overweight or obese. the only way to resolve

this

inssue

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issue

is to encourage their

children

and families to exercise

regulary

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regularly

and start to eat

healthy

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healthily

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