1.You have recently attended a job interview and have been offered the job. Write a letter to the company accepting the job offer, and provide details about when you will be able to start and any other information you think they may need.

Dear Sir, My name is Seema Shah. A day ago, I attended
job
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interview in your
company
for an assistant IT manager. I am writing
this
letter to request about the receiving my job offer and send me an offer letter. I am very enthusiastic about all kinds of work, and I am flexible about all types of work.
Hence
, I can contribute to your
company
's events and all settlements.
Furthermore
, I would prefer to join on the 1st of November if your
company
is comfortable with
this
.
This
is because my project with another
company
will be completed
at the end
of October.
Therefore
, if your
company
is comfortable with these settlements, I will definitely join at the beginning of November.
In addition
, I will send my resume and degree certificate for your reference.
Also
, if you need any other documents, you can contact me via email or send a text message.
Moreover
, I am really enthusiastic about my new start-up, getting involved in your
company
, and providing great results and profits for your
company
. In anticipation, await your positive response. Yours faithfully, Seema
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Task Achievement
Avoid requesting for a job offer in a letter accepting the job and receiving an offer; focus on accepting the position and clarifying the start date.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure each paragraph addresses a single idea and clearly links to the overall purpose of the letter.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter begins with a clear greeting and closes with a polite sign-off.
Task Achievement
The tone is formal and appropriate for a job acceptance letter.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gratitude
  • acceptance
  • position offered
  • start date
  • flexibility
  • documentation
  • enthusiasm
  • commitments
  • contribute
  • team
  • offer letter
  • employment contract
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