More and more people work from home or study from home with the development of computer technology. Do you think it is positive or negative development?

Technology makes communication

become

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easier nowadays. From using letters to using e-mail, at

the

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present

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we can talk with other people face-to-face through the

screen

. And from that fact, the concept of

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from

home

and

study

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from

home

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born. In

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whether these concepts are good or bad. First of all, even after the COVID-19 pandemic ended, many companies still have been having their employee

work

from

home

. Working from

home

has many good points.

For example

, you don't have to

stuck

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in traffic going to

work

or coming back

home

since you

work

at your house.

Moreover

, the

work

environment may become more

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because you are in your own room.

Furthermore

, it is the same for students

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study

from

home

. Because they don't have to wake up early to get

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and commute to school, they will be more happy. Teaching through the online meeting program,

teacher

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the teacher

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often records the video of the lecture, so that

student

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students

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can revise on their own. In spite of the fact that

work

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working

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from

home

and

study

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studying

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from

home

have

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many good points.

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also

drawbacks. When working or studying from

home

, unless you turn on your webcam ,other

persons

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won't know what you are doing. So somebody might

doing

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something

such

as playing video games, eating

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, or sleeping ,

in stead

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instead

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of working or studying.

In addition

to

this

disadvantage, it's harder for you to focus on your task because you can do anything

while

looking at the

screen

and pretending to listen. There's

also

a limit that you can interact with other people through the

screen

. In conclusion, there are both positive and negative developments to

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able to

work

or

study

from

home

. You can save time and cost in commuting and working in

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a familiar

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environment.

On the other hand

, working and learning through the

screen

may be less effective because of

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of focus and

less

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social interactions.