Museums and art gallaries should concentrate on works that show histrov and culture of their own countrv rather than works of the other parts in the world. To what extent to do vou aaree or disaaree?

It is thought that exhibitions and

museums

of each

country

ought to present only their own nation’s

traditions

and backgrounds, which I completely agree with. To achieve a clear picture;

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matter needs to be seen on a broader canvas. There are several reasons for galleries to only show their own history and

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Firstly

, illustrating other cultures in another

country

can provoke some new attitudes in that society, which speeds the diminish of their rich

traditions

.

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matter can

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of globalization, which is a serious issue these days. Alterations in individual’s clothing from traditional ones to

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clothes is a shining example.

Secondly

, showing other

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might increase the risk of heists in the galleries, especially in under-developed countries. One reason for

that is

to gain profit by selling these stolen pieces of art to famous

museums

in Europe, which has

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during the recent years.

Museums

can play a vital role in order to demonstrate the rich

traditions

and historical objects of their land. A salient point to note here is that

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school-aged children can observe these objects closely and become familiar with their history.

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would broaden their horizons, and bring about a generation who know everything about their ancestors. Evidently, if these pieces

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spread out all over the universe, these teenagers cannot get familiar with their past. In conclusion, I believe

museums

and galleries of each

country

ought to display works of their own

country

. In

this

way, an open-minded generation might be generated, who do not allow

traditions

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forgotten.