Some people think that the best way to succeed in life is to get a university education, while others disagree and say that it is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the modern world, everyone defines

success

based on one’s outlook.

While

some

people

argue that the only way to be successful is to get a

degree

from

university

, other

people

disagree with

this

notion. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will explain more both views. On the one hand, some

people

think educational

university

is necessary to prove

extent

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of knowledge, and qualification for

career

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a career

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. Some professions require

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knowledge that

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from studying years at

university

. Being successful in

this

occupation can be achieved through increasing knowledge and science. Especially, doctors not only should they study in

university

for years, but

also

their

success

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with their level of degrees.

This

means

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they are more successful if they have a higher

university

degree

.

On the other hand

, most

people

contend that having

university

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educational

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does not indicate

success

. They find

success

in

experience

.

In other words

, frequency and practice are

priority

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for

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. It should be

noticed

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that even recruitment

individuals

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of individuals

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is based on their

experience

.

For instance

, tailoring is

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occupation that being successful needs

experience

and skills. In conclusion,

although

, having

experience

is important, getting

university

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a university

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educational

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education

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is essential for every field to succeed. I believe that nowadays the best way to show how you are qualified for each career and

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suitable

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a suitable

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job is to have

university

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a university

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degree

. In fact, the purpose of having

degree

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a degree

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is to get

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an efficient

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job, so it is the easier way to get

job

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a job

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and succeed.