The line graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.

The line graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.
The line chart provides a comparison between
radio
listeners and television audiences during the whole day in the UK in December 1992.
Overall
, more people preferred watching television rather than listening to the
radio
throughout the day.
While
the number of people engaged in
radio
listening was higher in the morning, it witnessed a significant decline toward the evening.
To begin
with, the percentage of people watching television experienced a slight increase of around 5% at noon.
Then
,
this
number was followed by a sharp growth to around 48% at around 8.00 in the evening.
Furthermore
, it declined rapidly after 10 pm. Turning to the number of
radio
listeners, increasing from around 8% at 6 in the morning, it reached its peak of just under 30% at 8. Afterwards, it showed a sustained decline till around 2 a.m.
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