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The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.
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The tables below depict the data about the
temperatures
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 and the span of daylight in December 2018 in two major cities in the world,
London
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 and
Sydney
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.
Overall
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, it can be concluded from the picture that
Sydney
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 had hotter
temperatures
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 and longer daytime compared to
London
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 during the same weekend. The most significant information that we can get is that
London
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 was colder as it had far lower
temperatures
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 than
Sydney
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. From Friday 28th until Sunday 30th of December,
London
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 had rather fluctuating
temperatures
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, ranging from 4
degrees
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Celsius
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 (minimum) and 13
degrees
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Celsius
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 (maximum). On the exact same dates and on the other side of the world,
Sydney
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 experienced much warmer
temperatures
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. The heat tended to be higher as the day passed, varying from 17
degrees
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Celsius
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 (the lowest) and even reaching 31
degrees
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Celsius
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 on the
last
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 day.
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, the hours of daylight for both cities
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 differ. In
London
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, the sun rises at roughly 8 am and sets just before 4 pm in the afternoon.
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,
Sydney
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 had an earlier sun-rise that arose at around 5.45 am and set at about 8 pm. So,
London
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 had approximately 8 hours of daylight
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Sydney
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 had 8 hours of night-time.
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