Nowadays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots. Why do you think this is happenung? Is it a positive or negative development?
Robotics increasingly play a role both in the home and the workplace.
This
is due to
the advancements in technology and it should be seen as a positive development because it helps to reduce a person's workload.
The newest update in machines makes people rely on it. This
is
happened because of the Unnecessary verb
apply
ability
of mechanical devices in learning
more complicated data from various sources. Change preposition
to learn
Besides
, today's high-tech devices
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devices'
device's
ability
in processing
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to process
informations
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information
pieces of information
are
way faster than before. As an example, there are many computer brands that offer a rapid processor that has the Correct subject-verb agreement
is
ability
to process huge amount
of data within just Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
some
seconds. It shows the difference between previous inventions with the newest invention that the recent Correct determiner usage
a few
has
Verb problem
apply
the
huge differences in having Correct article usage
apply
a
better quality.
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apply
In addition
, due to
its advancements in the current time, almost all of the human tasks are becoming robots'
. Change noun form
robots
This
better improvement is the result of the advanced machines
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the advanced machine's ability
the ability of the advanced machine
ability
to finally
do the activities that are previously done by human
. Fix the agreement mistake
humans
For instance
, in the recent
published Change the adjective
recently
article
there is a certain robot that has Add a comma
article,
overtake
the human figure of the caregiver job. It is a robot that Change the form of the verb
overtaken
able
to provide Add a missing verb
is able
the
caring needs of the elderly, which was Change preposition
for the
before
being done by Change preposition
apply
human
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humans
,
until the robot Remove the comma
apply
had
arrived and took over the task.
In conclusion, the role of Unnecessary verb
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human
in daily Fix the agreement mistake
humans
task
is fading Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
by
time. Change preposition
over
This
is because of the ability
of modern technology to adapts
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adapt
on
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to
the
human needs, which shows a huge positive impact because it might be lowering people's role in doing tasks.Correct article usage
apply
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