The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.
The given tables show the data about the temperatures and hours of day time in the same three days of December 2018, in
London
and Sydney
. The units were measured in celsius
and the information on both tables consisted of Capitalize word
Celsius
temperature
, time of sunrise
and sunset
, and the date.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that daytimetime
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daytime time
daytime-time
Sydney
was longer than in London
. Thus
, it was impacted by the temperature
, that Sydney
was warmer than London
on all three days.
In terms of the city of London
, on all given days, sunrise
and sunset
times only have a 1 - 2 minutes difference, sunrise
at 08:06 and sunset
at 15:58. Because of the short day time, the higher temperature
only reach maximum in 13 degree
celcius
on Sunday 29th, whereas
the lowest temperature
also
in the same date in 3 degree
celcius
.
Meanwhile in the city of Sydney
, the day light was longer than in London
. Sunrise
was start at 05:45 and sunset
at 20:07. As a result
, the temperature
was more hotter with the higher temperature
in 31 degree
celcius
on Sunday 30th and the lowest temperature
in 17 degree
celcius
on Friday 28th.Submitted by 2024successielts on
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