In many countries today,parents are able to choose to send their children to single sex schools or co educational schools. Some people think that children going to to single sex schools have disadvantages latter in life. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In
this
modern world, selecting an accurate place for education is a matter of concern. Whether to select a same
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same-sex
sex
insitute
or Correct your spelling
institute
both
gender netural
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natural
neutral
places
is a decision of caregivers in many nations. However
, many notions opine that deciding a
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on a
single
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single-sex
sex
schools
leads to many hurdles in the life of Change the noun form
school
childrens
' when they Correct your spelling
children
went
to colleges and workplaces. I Wrong verb form
go
also
concur with this
phenomenon.
The first reason behind my belief is the lack of cooperation. For example
, many jobs are handled by both
men and women. From a study, it is seen that people who studied in one
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one-sex
sex
schools trust
the same sex
more as compared to others. The reason is clear because they were not familiar with opposite
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the opposite
sex
during their initial days. Thus
, it will impact the workflow as well as
output
of Correct article usage
the output
both
employee
and employers. Fix the agreement mistake
employees
In addition
to it
, they may face competition in Correct pronoun usage
this
latter
life. These days females and Correct your spelling
later
mens
can perform Correct your spelling
men
task
without any gender Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
discrimation
. Correct your spelling
discrimination
Mens
are Correct your spelling
Men
also
seen in culinary activities. If they lose to study together they will not be aware of the amount of competiton
they can receive from Correct your spelling
competition
womens
.
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women
The another
reason is Remove the article
Another
trust
issues may enter into the life. From education places
juveniles can learn to Add a comma
places,
trust
each others
. Change to a singular noun
other
For instance
, girls are abused by many boys sexually and mentally after they got
married especially in India. Many girls are Wrong verb form
get
affraid
to marry a guy because they do not know how men can handle them Correct your spelling
afraid
due to
the same sex
places
. It will result into
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in
lower
level of Add an article
the lower
a lower
trust
. Additionally
, they may Add a missing verb
be affraid
affraid
to talk and sit with strangers owing to the news about rapes and Correct your spelling
afraid
murdered
of girls.
In conclusion, parents have Replace the word
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right
to decide the starting schooling based on Correct article usage
the right
preference
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the preference
of
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for
same
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same-sex
sex
or both
. However
, one sex
education place have
many issues. Change the verb form
has
Moreover
, I firmly believe that childern
should have Correct your spelling
children
right
to study in Correct article usage
the right
co educational
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co-educational
places
so that they can know the cooperation, how to work with each other and how to trust
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