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people

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to improve their knowledge of digitalization.Some

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suggest that written letters

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the best way to communicate.

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viewpoint, I personally agree with

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with,the major concern of communication

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nowadays many

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use the technology

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communicate

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others

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cost is free. Which is in every industry

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use

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resource department (HRD)

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that they send for applied jobs.

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to the

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. In conclusion,I strongly believe that

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digitalization must disrupt

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people

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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180 words

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