There is an increasing population on the planet, and people are running out of water, food, and fuel. To what consequences may overpopulation lead? In your opinion, what measures calation?n be taken to fight overpopu

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increasing

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in

number

of

population

due to

health care development, so a

raise

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rise

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in

number

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a number

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of

people

may cause

decrease

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in needs

such

as water, food, housing ,electricity, and fuel. In

this

statment

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statement

I will discuss how we can

avoide

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avoid

sources

needs difficulty. In my opinion, the problem is on the availability of

sources

not on the

number

of populations. In the

beganing

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beginning

, we will talk about

reasons

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of

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reduction

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the reduction

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of resources.

Deforstraion

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Deforestation

is the

most big

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problem that

threat

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plants

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and

animals

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animals'

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life

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which are used as the most important source of food. Bury the seas for building houses.

Consumtion

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Consuming

Consumption

lots of water during

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shower

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, farming, cleaning or uses for cooking.

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mean

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loss

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of biodiversity around the world. Bad distribution of

population

,

for

example

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Maldive lands has a small

number

of

people

that live

on

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there.

Inaddition

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In addition

,

humane

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has

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negative

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a negative

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affect

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on the climate by using a lot of fossil fuel which emits

poluten

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pollution

polluted

polluting

gas.

Second,

we have to give some

recommendation

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recommendations

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to avoid

this

problem. As we can see,

deforstration

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deforestation

and hunting animals issue must treated by

government

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the government

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who

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can add some districted roles for citizens to prevent any hunting or cutting

trees

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of trees

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. Education is the main element

to raise

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population's

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the population's

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information about how to protect water and other

sources

.

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, even if

people

have

knowlege

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knowledge

about

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the protction

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protction

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protection

of

sources

they need roles to keep them. Family

also

responsable

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responsible

on

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raising the

population

, they

have

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aware that

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icreasing

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increasing

number of

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apply

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population

will cause overcrowding and raise

in

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the cost of living.

Furthermore

,

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the govenment

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govenment

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government

should

encourag

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encourage

sustainable living and the development of renewable energy

sources

. In conclusion, finding and protecting resources to avoid the issue of increasing

number of

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population

are

responsable

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responsible

both

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for both

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people

and

government

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the government

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. Hand by hand

of

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each of them will give a successful result.