Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

It is becoming increasingly common

for working

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to work

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or

studying

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study

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from

home

since technology has become more accessible and affordable. Some

people

think that

this

situation

as

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is

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a

positve

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positive

development.

On the contrary

, I believe that

this

trend could lead to various drawbacks for the following reasons. On the one hand, working remotely might be efficient yet it

decrease

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physical social interaction between human beings. As a social creature, socialization plays a significant role in human life in order to survive.

Therefore

, it is important for

people

to maintain their interaction

between

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each other. Offices or schools

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to be

a

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place

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where the relation begin but when the situation is shifted public

would

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not interact in the same way anymore, which leads to

the

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decrease

of

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social skills.

Furthermore

, the lack of social skills could be harmful for children since they are still in their developing age and socialization is important for their brain development.

On the other hand

,

people

who are working remotely could have a vulnerable body because there are lack of physical activities.

For instance

,

people

who work in

office

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an office

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more or less must perform some physical action since they need to mobile from their

home

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homes

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to their workplace. By staying at

home

, workers tend to sit in front of their

computer

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computers

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and do not move at all.

This

circumstance

lead

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to

some

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several negative health conditions,

such

as scoliosis. The same thing goes

to

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for

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students. Students, either children or teenagers, are required to be active.

However

, if they study from

home

, they would lose the experience of doing physical education or other

acitivities

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activities

.

To sum up

, the method of remote working or studying provides several drawbacks

for

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the social and physical condition of employees or students.

Therefore

, I remain convinced that

this

is a negative development.