IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 6.5

the system used for rubbish collection in your local area is not working properly. this is causing problems for you and your neighbors. write a letter to the local rubbish collection system is not working properly. write a letter to the local council. In your letter describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly explain how this is affecting you and your neighbors suggest what should be done about the problem

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Dear Sir, I would like to bring to your attention the matter of the
system
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 which is utilized for waste collection
is
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 not working properly for the past few days.
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, creating issues for everyone. The
system
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 is used to collect garbage daily, but nowadays, we can see a huge heaps of it in our local area. Despite the efforts of our local people to solve
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 problem,
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 problem continues to persist.
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 has affected my family and my
neighbors
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 in several ways.
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, it has made our environment more polluted with flies and mosquitoes which
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 cause health issues.
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, rain worsens the situation. I would be grateful if you could set up a new
system
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 for us for the collection of litter or find out the issue in our existing
system
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. I would appreciate
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 step. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully. Parjit Kaur

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task achievement
Expand your description of the problem with specific examples or details to fully address the prompt.
task achievement
Maintain a formal tone consistently throughout the letter for a more appropriate response to the local council.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas more clearly, making sure each paragraph has a distinct point and flows logically to the next.
coherence cohesion
Use a variety of linking words and phrases to better connect your sentences and ideas.
coherence cohesion
Ensure a clear separation of ideas between paragraphs to improve readability and structure.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • waste management
  • sanitation services
  • litter accumulation
  • refuse collection
  • debris overflow
  • bin collection
  • hygiene hazards
  • vermin infestation
  • aesthetic degradation
  • municipal services
  • rectification measures
  • implementation
  • efficiency
  • accountability
  • proactive steps
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