the system used for rubbish collection in your local area is not working properly. this is causing problems for you and your neighbors. write a letter to the local rubbish collection system is not working properly. write a letter to the local council. In your letter describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly explain how this is affecting you and your neighbors suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir,
I would like to bring to your attention the matter of the
system
which is utilized for waste collection is
not working properly for the past few days. Verb problem
has
Hence
, creating issues for everyone.
The system
is used to collect garbage daily, but nowadays, we can see a huge heaps of it in our local area. Despite the efforts of our local people to solve this
problem, this
problem continues to persist.
This
has affected my family and my neighbors
in several ways. Change the spelling
neighbours
Firstly
, it has made our environment more polluted with flies and mosquitoes which further
cause health issues. Secondly
, rain worsens the situation.
I would be grateful if you could set up a new system
for us for the collection of litter or find out the issue in our existing system
. I would appreciate this
step. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully.
Parjit KaurSubmitted by neetpunar on
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task achievement
Expand your description of the problem with specific examples or details to fully address the prompt.
task achievement
Maintain a formal tone consistently throughout the letter for a more appropriate response to the local council.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas more clearly, making sure each paragraph has a distinct point and flows logically to the next.
coherence cohesion
Use a variety of linking words and phrases to better connect your sentences and ideas.
coherence cohesion
Ensure a clear separation of ideas between paragraphs to improve readability and structure.