The chart below shows the expenditure of 2 countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the expenditure on commodities between
France
and the UK in 2010.
The figures for the consumption of cars and computers are similar to some extent. The money that each country spent on cars was nearly 425,000 Use synonyms
pounds
in 2010 on average, Use synonyms
while
the cost of computers was approximately 350,000 Linking Words
pounds
.
Compared to Use synonyms
France
, England had an overwhelming expenditure on books and cameras. To be more specific, the consumption of books in the United Kingdom, which was 400,000 Use synonyms
pounds
in number, was obviously an advantage. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the cost of cameras in the UK(360,000) was around two times larger than in Linking Words
France
(140,000).
Regarding the expenditure on perfume, Use synonyms
France
played an important role as a great consumer in 2010, with a total consumption of 200,000 Use synonyms
pounds
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the British still had a considerable number of 150,000.
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Overall
, French people seemingly spent their incomes on luxury goods aimed at recreation and fashion, Linking Words
whereas
the English populace had a preference for digital equipment and learning materials.Linking Words
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