Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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Recycling has been a controversial issue for every Earth's
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recycling efficiency and hope governments to implement legal requirements. In my
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, publishing clear a recycling strategy and explaining why the citizens need to obey these policies. First of all,
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responsilibies
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the recycling strategy clearly to
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the waste from populations, which is a
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method to force communities to follow the legal
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requirements
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be a livable planet, as the strategy
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, some
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toward
having excellent recycling habits.
For example
, in Japan, the Japanese government sets up numerous commercials about the
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importance
of recycling. which are
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around
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the Japanese street or
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intersections, which influence
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visible
policies.
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, the environment has become
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than ever before
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to wasting food.
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to talk about
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destroying
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nature, mentioning
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less reusing so that the wilderness
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a huge decline.
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trash on the Taiwanese coastline since
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of recycling, after Taiwan authorities display
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newspapers
, an increasing number of
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start cleaning
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the beaches. In summary,
government
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has a significant power to allow
residents
to know the
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importance
of recycling, if entire Earth's
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an awareness of the environmental pulltions,
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, because all of the
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human
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having
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great recycling habits.
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task response
You should provide a clear thesis statement and ensure your essay maintains focus on the question asked. Address the specific topic of how laws can impact recycling behavior and whether you believe they are necessary, to a larger extent.
coherence and cohesion
Work on logical sequencing of ideas and paragraphing. Create a more cohesive structure by using linking words effectively and organizing your essay into clear introductions, body paragraphs, and conclusions.
task support
Support your main points with specific examples or data where possible. This strengthens your argument and demonstrates a clear understanding of the subject. Referring to more concrete examples of laws influencing recycling could enhance your essay.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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