The diagram details the process of making smoked fish. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the

The diagram details the process of making smoked fish. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the
The chart illustrates the steps involved in the production of smoked
fish
.
Overall
, there are thirteen steps in the production of smoked
fish
, from catching the
fish
to distributing it to sell in stores.
Firstly
,
fish
are caught in large nets out at sea and
then
transported by boat back to the port. Once at the port, the
fish
are
then
stored and frozen. When the
fish
are ready to be smoked, they are first thawed out in fresh water and
then
have their heads removed and cut into suitable pieces. The
fish
are
then
soaked in salty water with yellow colouring before being smoked. Once the
fish
have been smoked, they are
then
packaged into boxes and
then
frozen at zero degrees
celsius
Capitalize word
Celsius
show examples
. The frozen products are
then
kept in a cold store before they are distributed by truck to local
fish
stores ready to be sold to the public.
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