The diagram details the process of making smoked fish. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the
The chart illustrates the steps involved in the production of smoked
fish
.
Overall
, there are thirteen steps in the production of smoked fish
, from catching the fish
to distributing it to sell in stores.
Firstly
, fish
are caught in large nets out at sea and then
transported by boat back to the port. Once at the port, the fish
are then
stored and frozen. When the fish
are ready to be smoked, they are first thawed out in fresh water and then
have their heads removed and cut into suitable pieces. The fish
are then
soaked in salty water with yellow colouring before being smoked.
Once the fish
have been smoked, they are then
packaged into boxes and then
frozen at zero degrees celsius
. The frozen products are Capitalize word
Celsius
then
kept in a cold store before they are distributed by truck to local fish
stores ready to be sold to the public.Submitted by nguyenhuyhoa1506 on
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