The diagram details the process of making smoked fish. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the

The diagram details the process of making smoked fish. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the
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The chart illustrates the steps involved in the production of smoked
fish
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.
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, there are thirteen steps in the production of smoked
fish
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, from catching the
fish
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to distributing it to sell in stores.
Firstly
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,
fish
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are caught in large nets out at sea and
then
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transported by boat back to the port. Once at the port, the
fish
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are
then
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stored and frozen. When the
fish
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are ready to be smoked, they are first thawed out in fresh water and
then
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have their heads removed and cut into suitable pieces. The
fish
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are
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soaked in salty water with yellow colouring before being smoked. Once the
fish
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have been smoked, they are
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packaged into boxes and
then
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frozen at zero degrees
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. The frozen products are
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kept in a cold store before they are distributed by truck to local
fish
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stores ready to be sold to the public.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish with synonyms.
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