The map below show the centre of a small town called lslip as it is now, and plans for this development.

The map below show the centre of a small town called lslip as it is now, and plans for this development.
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The maps compare the modification of the
centre
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of a small town, now and after restructuring in
lslip
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slip
Islip
.
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, the majority of facilities will be changed and new features will be added in terms of transportation, and accommodation.
According to
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the present map, there is a main
road
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along the map continued from the east to the west,
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, rows of
shops
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are located across the street. In the beginning and where
shops
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ended, There is an access
road
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to park in the southeast corner and a school
further
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southwest. The housing area is situated at the
centre
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which is below the main
road
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. After modification, the main
road
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is going to be replaced by a pedestrian-only path. The south row of
shops
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will remain unchanged,
while
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the north one planned to be demolished and some facilities will be built
such
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as a bus station, a new shopping
centre
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, a car park, and a new housing area. The whole
centre
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is going to be surrounded by a dual carriageway, which is circled and provides access for cars. The park and school are going to be kept,
however
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, the former is going to be smaller in size. Another accommodation will be added next to the previous housing on the south side of the
shops
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.
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