The map below show the centre of a small town called lslip as it is now, and plans for this development.

The map below show the centre of a small town called lslip as it is now, and plans for this development.
The maps compare the modification of the
centre
of a small town, now and after restructuring in
lslip
Correct your spelling
slip
Islip
.
Overall
, the majority of facilities will be changed and new features will be added in terms of transportation, and accommodation.
According to
the present map, there is a main
road
along the map continued from the east to the west,
additionally
, rows of
shops
are located across the street. In the beginning and where
shops
ended, There is an access
road
to park in the southeast corner and a school
further
southwest. The housing area is situated at the
centre
which is below the main
road
. After modification, the main
road
is going to be replaced by a pedestrian-only path. The south row of
shops
will remain unchanged,
while
the north one planned to be demolished and some facilities will be built
such
as a bus station, a new shopping
centre
, a car park, and a new housing area. The whole
centre
is going to be surrounded by a dual carriageway, which is circled and provides access for cars. The park and school are going to be kept,
however
, the former is going to be smaller in size. Another accommodation will be added next to the previous housing on the south side of the
shops
.
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