The chart below gives information on the average cost of a monthly plan from four different mobile phone providers in a European country, between January and September 2012, measured in euros.
The line graph illustrates the average fee of monthly mobile plans for four different types of cellular companies in a European country from
January
to September 2012.
Overall
, all mobile phone providers' costs experienced an upward trend except Sim Tx. Also
, the Alpha was the least popular provider at the beginning of the period and it became the most popular one at the end
.
In terms of, Provider Demo, initially
there was an upward trend from January
to July at about 15 to 25 respectively. In between these two months, it had some fluctuations and at the end
, it was about 24 as the lowest cost. In addition
to that, the
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rose
its cost gradually until September approximately from 12 to 17 Verb problem
raised
while
Alpha has
moderate growth from Wrong verb form
had
January
at about 5 to 6 and then
dropped slightly to its initial value on
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month
of June. Add an article
the month
a month
However
, after June it significantly increased to the high point outraced Demo at the end
.
The figure Sim Tx, in January
, spent around 9 Euros and then
rose marginally to around 14 with some fluctuations during 5 months and after June plummeted to approximately 8 in September.Submitted by ranasinghenadeeshani07 on
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