The chart below show the the information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010.
The graph gives information on
men
and women in amount of membership in Use synonyms
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gym
between 1980 to 2010. It is clearly seen that the Fix the agreement mistake
gyms
member
of Correct your spelling
number
men
reached Use synonyms
a
highest point Change the word
its
at
2005 Change preposition
in
for
around 5000, Change preposition
on
whereas
the membership of women in Linking Words
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gym
reached 2900 in 2005.
In detail, the membership of Correct article usage
the gym
men
in Use synonyms
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gym
sharply rose to around 4000 between 1980 to 1985 which rapidly Correct article usage
the gym
drops
to about 1800 in 1995. Wrong verb form
dropped
moreover
, the amount of Linking Words
men
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like
Change preposition
apply
a
Correct article usage
apply
skyrocket
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skyrocketed
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
quicky
Correct your spelling
quickly
climbed
to almost 5000 in 2005, but after that, the Wrong verb form
climbing
member
of Correct your spelling
number
men
in Use synonyms
Use synonyms
gym
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gyms
has
Verb problem
apply
a
Correct article usage
apply
quick drop
to around 700 in 2010.
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quickly dropped
On the other hand
, the amount of Linking Words
female
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females
are
steadily Change the verb form
is
increase
from 1000 to 2800 between 1980 to 1995 Wrong verb form
increased
while
a slight drop to around 2500 in 2000. Linking Words
In addition
, a significant climb back to around 2800 in 2005 which a slight decrease to around 1900 in 2010.Linking Words
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